帮我检查一下英语作文对不对
- 培训职业
- 2025-05-04 10:11:07
1、第一句中的he改成his，应该用形容词形物主代词
2、第三句中的bron应该是born，应该是拼错了
3、he is living in changzhou now用一般现在时比较好。he lives in
changzhou now
4、第四第四句have改成has，用第三人称单数
5、眼睛用pair不合适，直接说small eyes就行了
6、one small mothe改成a small mouth（one的用法不是很合适，mouth拼错了）
7、第六句把he改成his，用形容词性物主代词
8、第七句把like改成likes，用三单形式。把play改成playing，like+动词ing
9、最后一句......不说原因了，我认为应该这么说“I like him because he studies very hard,I want to learn from him （本人认为like用在这里不合适，不过语法没错误就是了）
修改后全文如下：
his name is zha reng jie.He is twelve years old. He was born in changzhou and he lives in changzhou now. He has small eyes a small mouth. He is very mild. his favourite subject is chinese.He likes playing computer games and playing the violin. I like him because he studies very hard,I want to learn from him
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