我是个初中生,老师布置一篇英语作文,是有关"中国梦,我的梦",我试着写了一篇,但总觉得不太好,请指教并改正
- 培训职业
- 2025-05-06 16:03:08
中央精神贯彻的也太快了吧。中国梦立刻就上来啦。
我觉得有改动的句子用括号括出来了。
（你后面写国家和自己就不能用everyone做主语了，换一种说法较好 ）For our motherland ,the largest dream is to make its effort to become stronger and more beautiful in the world. (As a middle school student, I also have a dream; my dream is to become an astronaut in the future.) （When I was a little child, I became interested in science and space, reading a lot of books about science and space.） I admire the astronauts for their courage and achievement and（ I always dream of walking in space one day）. But I know my dream won’t come true unless I do my best . So I make up my mind to learn as much as possible at school. As the saying goes ,“Where is a will, there is a way”, I believe I will achieve my dream as long as I stick to my goal. (I hope I can make a contribution to realize China’s dream）.
lz英语底子真挺好，没什么要改的。比以前我回答的人写得好多了。
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